Friday, February 22, 2008

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Monday, January 14, 2008

Hope

Entun said"Well I think we got rid of him."Erika asks"Are you sure we should have done that to him?"I thought"Its ok Erika."Then I saw a band-age on her head.Well actually it was just a big cloth.I hit the wall.She looked were I was but it was to late she saw me and smiled.Entun asked"Why are you smiling?"Erika said"Nothing..Its nothing."I guess she doesn't hate me."I thought.Then a thief came.I jumped down and said"What do you want?"He said"Who are you?"Erika said"Its ok reny."I looked at her hopeful eyes and I got the different name business message and I said"Ok."Entun said"Who's he?"Erika said"Oh I met him sometime and he said he'd be are body guard."The guy handed the medicine to Entun and and walked away.I asked"What's that?"Entun said medicine for Erika's injury." "Oh."I said.Erika sat there smiling at me and i felt myself blushing.To becontinued.

Sunday, January 6, 2008


FIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I was shaking and Erika and Entun were just staring at me.I looked down but no the sword wasn't there but instead the crystal took its place.I asked"What happened?"They just stared at me not saying a word.I saw myself shivering and I couldn't stop...I thought"Why..Why is this happening?"Entun walks up to me and punches me straight in the head and says"Monster....Whats wrong with you?You hurt Erika when you were fighting the goblins."I said"Wha-what!!!!!I didn't know..I didn't know what happened its all a blur." "Well you did."said Entun."NO NO NO!!!!Why does this always happen to me!!!"I yelled.Entun started to back away.The ground started to shake Erika screamed and I started to cry.I hadn't cried since I was four years old.I fell to the ground knowing there was nothing left for me.I was going to let Entun kill me...He tried but nothing work I dodged them while unconscious somehow and I don't know how.I woke up and i was locked in a cottage that was on fire.I dodged in and out of falling wood that was burning.I got out and saw Entun running with Erika on his back.I bought some black clothes with a rag to cover my mouth and some of my nose.I falled them and hid in the shadows.To becontinued!!!!!!!!

Saturday, January 5, 2008

amnesia


Erika said"you don't remember who you are?!" "yeah...."I said."...him too?"said Entun.We made a camp out of town and I just walked by the forest.I thought"Why...Why can't I remember who I am.What happened to make me forge-...."I heard Erika scream and when she is hurt lets say you won't live to see tomorrow."I back at camp someho-"then I saw them..Dozens of goblins were surrounding my friends.I look down and see something shiny..A crystal.For some reason I picked it up and and *poof* a blade made of gold and silver came into my hand twenty feet wide and twenty feet long.Then the next thing I know the goblins were dead and I was covered in...There blood.To becontinued!!!!!!!!

Thursday, December 20, 2007

i wandered around untill i found town. i asked"what is this place?" he said"why this is fally the town of wonder!" i looked around and found well..my friends the girl is named erika the boy entun.erika yelled"hey eny!!!" erika and entun run up to me.i just stand there and say"who...are you?" entun said"eny its us dont u remember?" "uuuuuuuuuh...nope." i said. "why don't you remember us?"asked erika. i stood there and stared at them. i then remembered two things they were my friends and there names.i say"i remember you and ur names but nothing else...sorry."wait till next chapter!!!!!

Wednesday, December 19, 2007

"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!!" i said,*poof* they were gone my friends..."why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" i screamed i punched the ground so hard my knuckles turned white.i didn't how i'd explain how they disappeared."what the!!!!" i said and then was sucked into a portal of darkness.THWACK!!!!!!!!! i hit the ground so hard it made a crack."where am i?who am i?"i said,i had no idea who i was.